Week 13 100 Word Challenge

One day Skyler, Ava and Anthony decided to go on a hike through a valley that only two people have ever been too. All of them packed they're bag and headed for the hills. When they got to the lowlands the three of them had lot of energy. During the walk Ava heard loud laughing and chatting. It took them hours to find where it was coming from. Skyler realized the sound was the sun and the sky. All three of them were so confused. All of them were happy but they were exhausted so lied down to talk. 

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  1. hkbartleyDecember 7, 2018 at 9:21 AM

    I like the theme and plot of the story and how you got me questioning how the sun and sky were chatting and laughing. there is one part i got confused on, the second sentence did you mean to say all of them packed their bags or bag?

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  2. cutehamster654December 7, 2018 at 9:32 AM

    I like your story it was interesting and it sucked me in. I like how creative it was that the sun and the sky were laughing and chatting one thing I got a bit confused on was the last sentance was it they lied down to talk?

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